Revision Strategy

The shitty first draft article was pretty funny. It’s also extremely accurate. When she explains how the world seems like it’s collapsing when you start a first draft is certainly what it feels like. The daunting blank page makes you realize how incapable you are of writing, how stupid you really are! But all those … [Read more…]

Insight From Peers

Reading my peers essays helped me realize how important strong transitions are. They keep the reader engaged and make the whole essay interesting. The papers I read also used strong vocabulary to make the essay more colorful. Another thing I saw was the incorporation of really good ideas, but they didn’t relate to the thesis … [Read more…]

Thoughts On Paper – Messy Brainstorming

  Art could mean many different things. No matter the interpretation I’ve always liked ‘art’. I love that its a form of expression. It’s hard to explain to someone why you like a certain color or pattern so much because you’re using the right side of your brain; the creative hemisphere. You feel a certain way … [Read more…]

Incoherent Rambling About Art (Free Write)

Ben Zander spoke about the meaning of art in his TED talk, “The Transformative Power of Classical Music”.  Choosing one out of the three TED talks was difficult because they’re all so relevant to what were discussing and they’re all equally interesting. I chose Zander’s talk for a few reasons; He is clearly excited and … [Read more…]

Second Thoughts

Reading Southan’s text a second time made a few new things jump out at me. The first thing I realized was almost all the references he uses in the text are on the Effective Altruism website. That helped me better understand how much weight these projects held. Also on the website, there were so many … [Read more…]

Contemplating Art

Expanding the Thread   The article “Is Art a Waste of Time?”, by Rhys Southan, sparked a lot of deep thoughts. I didn’t think that my first english assignment would make me ponder all of my life choices and influence my future choices.   The first ‘thread’ that stood out to me was when Sam … [Read more…]

The Study of Websiteology

–My first impression of blogging– So far making a website has been extremely enjoyable. I am guilty of not being tech-savvy, but with the help of the teachers, it was so easy! I know we will be covering how art can relate to writing in the future and I feel as thoughts is our first … [Read more…]

The Joy of Living

There are few things in this world that allows us as humans to be overwhelmed with happiness. One of these life changing, developmental skills is rock skipping! Heck yeah!