Reading my peers essays helped me realize how important strong transitions are. They keep the reader engaged and make the whole essay interesting. The papers I read also used strong vocabulary to make the essay more colorful. Another thing I saw was the incorporation of really good ideas, but they didn’t relate to the thesis at all. I thought to myself how much I did this in my own essay. Moving forward I want to explore some of the big ideas I had and try to relate them to the theses. Dream big!
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